An amazing attempt
this is actaully done really really well, naturally the animation and drawings leave much room for improvement, but the scripting is done amazingly, with a little work i wouldnt be surprised if you had a fully functioning RPG in the next while.
if the animating or drawing that you do dose not meet your standards, you can always find ready and willing flash artist on the NG Forums and do some sort of joint project with one (or more) or them, something to remember is that some of the best things on newgrounds were done by more than one person, not to say that there is nothing good done by only one person, but alot of them are done by two, or even a team of people.
great job though, keep at it and i know that you can go far with this.